Tips to Tackle Your Application Essay with Confidence

Admission counselors and faculty read hundreds, often thousands, of student essays during the application review process. Make yours stand out for all the right reasons — show us why YOU are a perfect match for CIM.

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The CIM application essay question requires a response that is 500-750 words long. Here are some tips for making every word count!

  • To get started — get started! Sometimes getting your creative juices flowing is the hardest part. Begin by brainstorming a list of highlights, then put them in order from the most important to the least. Just like that you have a writing plan.
  • Be an original. Your essay needs to be a reflection of you. Skip clichés and avoid restating basic facts that are easily included elsewhere in the application.
  • Put yourself in OUR shoes. Imagine you’re an admission counselor or teacher reading your essay. What does it tell you about the student? Does it say enough about the person and musician?
  • One size DOES NOT fit all. It may be tempting to write one essay and change a few details or the school’s name, but the point is to tell us why CIM is a good fit for you and vice versa.
  • Eradicate errors. Proofread, then ask someone you trust to proofread your essay AGAIN before you hit submit.

    Here are a few bonus proofreading tricks:

    1. Produce your essay in a word processing program with spelling and grammar checking features rather than typing directly into an application form. Not only can it catch blatant typos, it will help you keep track of word count. That said, don’t rely solely on software for finding typing, spelling or grammar errors.
    2. Print a version to read on paper. For whatever reason, it is often easy to miss simple mistakes when you’re proofing something on screen only. Walk away for a while, then…
    3. Read it aloud. Going the extra step of reading your essay out loud will help you find any awkward sentences of transitions.
    4. Work your way UPStarting at the end and “reading” backwards helps you find typos that are real words but not the ones you meant to use(note: spellcheck won’t flag correctly spelled words).

One final tip — do yourself a favor and START TODAY.  Waiting till the last minute just adds unnecessary pressure. Rushing also makes you less likely to write an essay that genuinely represents you as an individual and artist and more likely to miss typos or grammar mistakes.

Of course, if you have any questions, don’t hesitate to email us at admission@cim.edu or call to speak with an admission counselor at 216.795.3107.

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Handel’s Alcina to be Performed by the CIM Opera

CIM Opera Theater presents HANDEL'S Alcina this Fall 2014
The CIM Opera Theater, directed by David Bamberger, is pleased to announce this fall’s production of Handel’s Alcina, November 5-8, 2014 in Kulas Hall.

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Students featured on CBS’s “On the Road with Steve Hartman”

On Friday, October 10 CBS Evening News with Scott Pelly aired it’s popular segment, “On the Road with Steve Hartman,” featuring Cleveland Institute of Music students Daniel Parvin and Marissa Plank, the artists-in-residence at Judson Manor, a senior living community.

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CIM student performs with Joshua Bell and is featured on HBO show

Cleveland Institute of Music student Leah Ferguson was awarded a coveted spot in a National YoungArts Foundation program where she was given the opportunity to perform with world-renowned violinist and Grammy winner, Joshua Bell. HBO’s three-time Emmy® nominated documentary series Young Arts Master Class  featured Ferguson and eight other young string players on the show, which premiered on in October.

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CIM’s own Jinjoo Cho wins the International Violin Competition of Indianapolis

The Cleveland Institute of Music congratulates CIM student and violinist Jinjoo Cho for earning the gold medal in the International Violin Competition of Indianapolis (IVCI). The winners were announced late Saturday night following the final concert of the competition.

As the winner of the competition, Cho will be awarded a $30,000 cash prize, international concert engagements including a Carnegie Hall Stern Auditorium recital debut, career management for the next four years and the four-year loan of the 1683 ‘ex-Gingold’ Stradivarius.

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IVCI Finals include CIM’s own Jinjoo Cho

The Cleveland Institute of Music congratulates violinist Jinjoo Cho, a long-time student at CIM, for moving on to the finals of the International Violin Competition of Indianapolis (IVCI), which will be simulcast live online, September 17 and 19, starting at 8pm.

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Sept. 17 CIM@Home Concert Webcast on Livestream.com

 

The best way to experience a Cleveland Institute of Music Orchestra performance is live and in person. For many fans (and family members) of our talented musicians this isn’t an option, so CIM is offering the next best thing — a live video webcast of the season premiere concert from Kulas Hall on Wednesday, September 17 at 8pm ET via new.livestream.com/cim. Continue reading

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CIM Returns to Severance Hall with Free Concert Series

The Cleveland Institute of Music, while busy preparing for the 2014-15 academic year and concert season, is pleased to announce the news that our musicians will again be returning for a special series of concerts at Severance Hall, presented at no charge to the attending public. Continue reading

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Alumnus premiered work and made conducting debut at festival

Cellist Joshua Roman (BM’04/MM’05), 31, is another CIM graduate taking an active role in building the next repertoire – as demonstrated by the world premiere of his work we do it to one another at a Music Academy of the West concert on August 2, 2014. Continue reading

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Grammy Winner, Cleveland Pops Oboist, CIM Alumnus

Today CIM alumnus Thomas Moore is principal oboist for the Cleveland Pops Orchestra, though it’s just one in a list of impressive positions on his resume, which also includes four Grammy Award wins. Not bad considering he chose the instrument almost by default, since his sisters had chosen the flute and clarinet and his parents had “banned” any brass from the house. Continue reading

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